For One Single Impression Prompt: Desert or Deserted.
1.
My journey told in the sand
-tomorrow, the rain.
2.When I was alone,
xx In the bleakest deep despair
xxx-then You were still there.
Copyright 2008 
For One Single Impression Prompt: Desert or Deserted.
1.
My journey told in the sand
-tomorrow, the rain.
2.When I was alone,
xx In the bleakest deep despair
xxx-then You were still there.
Copyright 2008
These are both incredibly beautiful, each in its own way. I think the first is my favorite, but only by a grain of sand or two.
ReplyDeleteAh,the stories written in sand. If only we could know someone would read them before the rain. Thanks, Edward.
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I really like how you wrote two very different poems based on just one word. I think I like the first one more than the second but then I reread the second and can't decide. Sand and loneliness: the hoped-for rain and company. Nice.
ReplyDeleteI love both. Both are so positive. I saw bleakness, you saw beauty.
ReplyDeleteJust beautiful and such deep meanings.
ReplyDelete..hardship,expectation,solitude..mere words..till the meanings are born..
ReplyDeleteI like the hope of the second poem.
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