Saturday, April 25, 2009

NaPoWriMo Poem #25

Riverway Reverie
By Edward S. Gault

After Jessie evicted us, we found the place on the Riverway.
We took lengthy walks along the Fens, had our first child and raised her there.
I had had several photo shows, and things were fine-then came the crash.

Copyright©2009
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5 comments:

  1. Andy SewinaApril 27, 2009 at 3:45 AM

    Very powerfully written. You've managed to reveal so much in such a small space. Thanks for posting this.

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  2. AnonymousApril 28, 2009 at 1:53 AM

    this one was G.O.O.D !! :)

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  3. gautami tripathyApril 28, 2009 at 11:24 AM

    Great post! Liked the ending.


    pot pourri

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  4. Stan SkiApril 28, 2009 at 5:13 PM

    A lifetime flashing by, and so much between the lines.

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  5. AmyApril 28, 2009 at 9:42 PM

    I look at all the words I've used in my American Sandwich, then I read yours and I am amazed at how much you say in your simplicity. Well done.

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