If I had the time,
I'd throw work out the window,
-spend it all with you.
Since you are here now,
And maybe no tomorrow
-we'll go for that walk.
If I could stop time,
I would keep this moment
-pressed in my journal.
For many years now,
I've worked twentyfour/seven
-all alone in room.
Arrived in heaven,
Peter led me to my cloud
-a vast library.
Copyright 2009
One single Impression: If I Had The Time
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Wonderful twist to close the poem! The wry humour there is utterly brilliant and so annoyingly logical but unexpected! Great paradoxical tensions!
Great! Particularly liked the last one.
I love the image of a moment pressed in a journal.
I love the idea of moments pressed in a journal. I find myself trying to journal as many of my special moments as I can. I don't always do them justice, but I press on.
"If I could stop time,
I would keep this moment
-pressed in my journal.:
Oh I love this!
A wonderful tour of the interior of time!
a great variety here. some romantic.. some reflective! the ending was very appropriate.
A wistful look at passing days - the final haiku is a fitting end. Nice!
I enjoyed the vision of a vast library on a cloud as being heaven...
each is graat along, but I like the story line of the string of these pearls...
Thanks, Edward--
nothing more important than going for that walk while you can.
i love that thrz a vast library waiting eternally... pressed n2 a journal.. dang, dig it!!
"Since you are here now,
And maybe no tomorrow
-we'll go for that walk."
I like this!
Yes we can not waste a moment. For time is sad and short. Well done my friend.
love-bd
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