I have a grandfather clock that continues its ever steady tick-tock, tick-tock, but it becomes the enemy when it seemingly speeds up when trying to beat a deadline!
I love your take on "never ending". It seems there is never enough time, yet some days time can go by so slowly. Beautiful Haiku, and I really like your title.(Thank you for stopping by and commenting).
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This one makes me think of the kids I teach and how they panic under the pressure of time. You capture it well. Thanks, Edward.
And Sandy, aren't we all kids that think we're taking a Test??!
Thanks, Edward--very nicely done!
I have a grandfather clock that continues its ever steady tick-tock, tick-tock, but it becomes the enemy when it seemingly speeds up when trying to beat a deadline!
Your poem made me chuckle with memories of sitting in a desk frantically trying to get through the test which seemed to self-replicate.
Very nice thought, Edward. This goes further than just school tests, it works for getting all the things we do in our lives done in time.
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It seems to me that the more accurately we measure time, the more caged we become.
Enjoyed this one.
Argh, I know this one. I still get nightmares from college classes...
I am watching the clock right now, have to go do something in a few minutes. Just one more comment!
.."the more accurately we measure time, the more caged we become"..thank u for this..
I love your take on "never ending". It seems there is never enough time, yet some days time can go by so slowly. Beautiful Haiku, and I really like your title.(Thank you for stopping by and commenting).
isn't that the truth!!
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