This Haiku is for the prompt Stranded, from the poetry blog
One Single Impression.
From the Prudential,
I look down at the city
-knowing I'm alone.
Copyright 2008
One Single Impression.
From the Prudential,I look down at the city
-knowing I'm alone.
Copyright 2008
See the NaPoWriMo Haiku below.
7 comments:
Loneliness
is what I endure
in midst of a crowd
collected clutters
it captures the feeling so eloquently
Even from high up in a big world, we can feel small and alone. You capture the experience straight on. Wonderful.
Writing in Faith: Poems
This one is deep and lovely!
I really like this: I find it interesting. I think the narrator is full of wonder about this feeling that occurs simply because he is UP there.
That is sure the perfect place to feel stranded, high above the world. That might be a good thing.
I feel that in cities, too. Neat place to be stranded, though.
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