Monday, April 7, 2008

Feeling A Tad Stranded?

This Haiku is for the prompt Stranded, from the poetry blog
One Single Impression.

Skyline From the Prudential,
I look down at the city
-knowing I'm alone.

Copyright 2008
See the NaPoWriMo Haiku below.





7 comments:

gautami tripathy said...

Loneliness
is what I endure
in midst of a crowd

collected clutters

qualcosa di bello said...

it captures the feeling so eloquently

SandyCarlson said...

Even from high up in a big world, we can feel small and alone. You capture the experience straight on. Wonderful.
Writing in Faith: Poems

tumblewords said...

This one is deep and lovely!

andrée said...

I really like this: I find it interesting. I think the narrator is full of wonder about this feeling that occurs simply because he is UP there.

Teri C said...

That is sure the perfect place to feel stranded, high above the world. That might be a good thing.

gardenpath said...

I feel that in cities, too. Neat place to be stranded, though.