Monday, April 7, 2008

Feeling A Tad Stranded?

This Haiku is for the prompt Stranded, from the poetry blog
One Single Impression.

Skyline From the Prudential,
I look down at the city
-knowing I'm alone.

Copyright 2008
See the NaPoWriMo Haiku below.





7 comments:

Anonymous said...

Loneliness
is what I endure
in midst of a crowd

collected clutters

qualcosa di bello said...

it captures the feeling so eloquently

SandyCarlson said...

Even from high up in a big world, we can feel small and alone. You capture the experience straight on. Wonderful.
Writing in Faith: Poems

Tumblewords: said...

This one is deep and lovely!

Anonymous said...

I really like this: I find it interesting. I think the narrator is full of wonder about this feeling that occurs simply because he is UP there.

Teri said...

That is sure the perfect place to feel stranded, high above the world. That might be a good thing.

Anonymous said...

I feel that in cities, too. Neat place to be stranded, though.