Saturday, April 25, 2009

NaPoWriMo Poem #25

Riverway Reverie
By Edward S. Gault

After Jessie evicted us, we found the place on the Riverway.
We took lengthy walks along the Fens, had our first child and raised her there.
I had had several photo shows, and things were fine-then came the crash.



Andy Sewina said...

Very powerfully written. You've managed to reveal so much in such a small space. Thanks for posting this.

Pretty Me!! said...

this one was G.O.O.D !! :)

gautami tripathy said...

Great post! Liked the ending.

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Stan Ski said...

A lifetime flashing by, and so much between the lines.

Amy said...

I look at all the words I've used in my American Sandwich, then I read yours and I am amazed at how much you say in your simplicity. Well done.